Friday, May 10, 2013

Reflection Over The Writing Process

     The writing process consists of five steps: prewriting, drafting, revising, proofreading, and publishing. I started out not being a big fan of the writing process. It had to because although five steps is not a lot but when getting to it, it is. The prewriting didn’t help me in the sense that once understanding the prewriting step I was now knowing what to write as seeing the prompt but helped me think where I can find sources and what sources I should use. Drafting is the second step and is just as important as the first step because it is when you gather all your information you want to use on your essay. Then putting it in your own words and starting a draft. This is where I had trouble as well because I used sources that had anything to do with the prompt even if it didn’t make sense in my paper.  As writing my first paper I didn’t take these five steps into heart but as the weeks passed I came to realize that the steps were helpful and if doing it correctly it made your writing process faster and easier. The first step was prewriting and the most difficult for me. I always feel once knowing the prompt I know off the bat what I want to write but once lifting up my pencil I can’t seem to write anything but then soon caught on what were the best sources. The third step is revising and is in which you proofread it. It helped a lot when I would read my paper more than once and read it out loud. The fourth step is editing. I got my papers proofread by classmates and friends who are in higher writing classes. Their input helped significantly and they marked off what was incorrect. My papers always had mistakes because I get into my papers and writing that when I think of something I want to say I’m still typing the last thing I though of leading me to leave out words. The final step is the simplest step and by this step all that is finish up on any touches left and then turning it in.
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Final Entry of the School Year- Final

     If you're looking for a unique blog you are fixing to after this post. Through out my second semester of WRC I have written papers for this class and my works improved as the year went by and although the grade doesn't reflect though I know I have. These posts have been written and thought out by me  deeply and what you're about to read you will see posts that I have spoken out of heart will touch you and other posts someone I look up to. 
     Hello, my name is Jerry Sanchez, but instead of teachers having to write down on the class roll call by what I go, I really go by Jerry...at least my doctor said that Gerardo in English was Jerry so since then I have been going by that. I am from Houston, Texas and since Houston has developed into an enormous city I am technically from Spring. My whole childhood to this day I love playing and everything that is affiliated with soccer. I played soccer for 4 years when attending Klein Collins High School. Like I had said in the beginning, there is a blog post about a visionary and who I admire. I look up to this visionary artist because I also love drawing. Since I was a student in elementary school I loved it, the freedom being able to create anything you mind desires to being able to forget about anything temporarily and deeply focus on just drawing. Leading me to decide on majoring in art, but specifically graphic design. I am currently an undergrad student who attends University of Texas at San Antonio. The summer before my new chapter in life, going to college, friends and family members tell you what to expect out of college. I received great tips from everyone and thankfully every one's tips helped me significantly, but one thing that stood us apart that everyone had a completely different first year of college. My first year was difficult to get adjusted to, but as the weeks go by I got adjusted to it. I met amazing people these months and God puts people in your path so that you can decide whether I should spending time with the right people or the wrong people. At times I thought and felt I was around the right people but God gives you signs you are wrong. When finishing up the school year i figured put who they were. Nonetheless I had an amazing first semester and don' regret anything and this first year of college has brought me moments that have made me mature.
     WRC has taught me to write the correct way but Mrs. Sundol and the way she helps us to make my class experience helpful. My writing was always weird because I truthfully can say that I didn't like writing but its not because of the subject but its because I am reserved and like to keep my thoughts I have to say privately. That being said when I do write, I write with what I feel. From my first paper in WRC I didn't get a good grade but every paper we got back I took in the mistakes and tried to improve on those for the next papers. The methods of researching has as well changed since starting out. Mrs. Sundol and our textbook taught me the sources the correct steps in finding out what sources and taught us the things you need to have a good paper.
     Shepard Fairey who said  “lets make art not war.” Sheppard Fairey is a renounced activist and street artist but when finding his love for art in High School he became in love and attached to the work of Keith Haring and his his way of thinking, "make art not war." Sheppard Fairey was introduced to street art in the 80s because of Keith Haring's work. Street artists are a just as any normal artist but whose canvas or work area is the street, wall, or on a sidewalk to promote there art and make a name for them. Although many people may believe to look at street art as vandalism, many seem to forget the message behind the street art pieces. Street art gives people the urban perspective to show people the everyday issues that we sometimes turn our back to. Keith Haring is an iconic artist who is known by many artists as one of the founders of pop art just as Andy Warhol  who “many people believe is one of the pioneers of the street art world’’ (qtd. in Keith Haring X OBEY), explains Julia Green, executive director at The Keith Haring Foundation. Keith Haring created a visual imagery that included characters, slogans, and patterns like anyone was doing. His pieces were like any other styles of art anyone has seen. The vibrant colors to being able to recognized it works from a mile away and how that it was Keith Haring. David Stark who is a foundation member of The Keith Haring Foundation also in The Works on Paper 1989, went as far to say "Keith Haring was a prodigy in the world of art his constant generosity of spirit and fearless productivity under death's shadow." Keith Haring loved art but he grew in a humble environment and always thought of the people around and loved helping people out no matter who it was, according to “Haring’s Kids Lesson Plans”, Haring was devoted to the children and worked with children in schools and hospitals. He donated his work to institutions, created books, and posters to educate children to advance their causes.
     Keith Haring is one of the originators for using his art to show a message in a way many artists usually do not. He was a visionary who visualized the world in a way many people did not in the sense that everything had meaning behind it. He believed that “art could reach all kinds of people, as opposed to the traditional view, which has art as this elitist thing…” (Works on Paper 5). Keith Haring was born on May 4, 1958 in Reading, Pennsylvania during a time when modern art was not as popular and becoming an artist was a long shot goal because to this day becoming a well known artist is difficult. Not many artists have the privilege to say that being an artist is helping them financially. Just as any kid growing up, drawing was always something kids loved to do in class and at home but you could observe that Keith Haring didn't just like drawing he loved it. Keith haring started from cartoons from Walt Disney and Dr. Seuss. Keith Haring attended Ivy School of Professional Art in Pittsburgh after graduating high school. Haring was pushed by his parents and his guidance counselor because if Keith Haring was serious about having a career in the art field it was best for him to attend a school that was for specifically for an art career such as the Ivy School of Professional Art in Pittsburgh, but then Keith dropped out after two semesters. That year after dropping out Keith Haring moved to New York to attend the School of Visual Arts. Haring's unique language and his environmental and material poetry brought forth a network of interweaving signs that could act on the nervous system of a city such as New York, according to Germano Celant, author of Labyrinths of Life and Death.
                             Untitled, 1987
     Once moving to New York he was influenced by the rebellious art movement and unknown art works. Keith Haring was deeply in New York’s cultural environment, and was well affected buy the city life and when arriving to “New York in 1978 as a scholarship student at the School of Visual Arts. All at once, he began to experience a multicultural urban community with its' own expressive vocabulary" (Journey of The Radiant Baby 17). The School of Visual Arts and in the vibrantly experimental East Village, gave Keith Haring life and energy. In the 80s, New York was deeply influenced by hip-hop attracting Keith Haring also attracted “to the street culture of hip-hop music, break dancing, and graffiti art was partially born from his rejection of the attitudes of the establishment power structure and his determination to inhabit a larger world” (Works on Paper 4). Keith Haring wanted to spread the street's voice and his art but in the beginning he had trouble deciding how his work can be seen by the city. Inspired by the graffiti on the walls of the downtown subways his belief of visual communication, Keith Haring worked on the walls down in New York subways and began filming the pieces. Keith Haring was working on and quickly created a popular following for his lively figural and patterned imagery and his cheekily outlaw activity. Haring shared few of the “tagging” tactics of urban graffitists "being drawn instead to the possibilities of a new public and vernacular kind of signage" (Encyclopedia Britannica).
      When Keith Haring was discovering his style in art he was helped by his teachers at the School of Visual Arts. Keith Haring discovered himself staring from a group of drawing then realizing his drawing had meanings behind them such as vocabulary leading him to think that drawing in the street because he had something to say and spread. Keith Haring just as any artist, when finding himself Keith “bought a roll of oak-tag paper and cut it up and put it all over the floor and worked on this whole group of drawings. The first few were abstracts, but then these images started coming” (The Keith Haring Foundation). One day when Keith Haring was “riding the subway and saw this empty black panel where an advertisement was supposed to go, he immediately realized that this was the perfect place to draw. He went back above ground to a card shop and bought a box of white chalk, went back down and did a drawing on it. It was perfect–soft black paper; chalk drew on it really easily” (The Keith Haring Foundation).
      Just as any artist, Keith Haring cared much about the feedback of the viewers because he wasn't doing his work for commission but for the people. Having any type of feedback from the community motivated Keith Haring to keep doing what he did best and which was going the streets a voice; “having this incredible feedback from people, which is one of the main things that kept me going so long, was the participation of the people that were watching me and the kinds of comments and questions and observations that were coming from every range of person you could imagine, from little kids to old ladies to art historians” (The Keith Haring Foundation).
     In 1982, Haring had his first New York one-man show at the Shafrazi Gallery. At this time Keith “Haring worked on sets, record sleeves, book covers” and because of his diverse projects many people at this time saw his work with or without knowing him ("Camila Rockwood"). Not only did he create paintings and sculptures for the show, he engulfed the entire gallery with his bold color choices and frenetic designs. A critical success, he soon became one of most popular artists of the time with exhibits in Japan, Brazil, and many other countries. Haring collaborated with other artists and performers, including Andy Warhol and William Burroughs. Wanting to make his art more accessible, Haring opened Pop Shop in New York City in 1986. The store sold posters, t-shirts, and other items baring his artwork and designs. He was also interested many social causes, painting an anti-drug mural that same year. In all, he did more than 50 public works and held numerous workshops for children. What made Keith Haring unique was that he never changed even how he was even with his accomplishments; Keith always tried to be humble and care for his family and his community. With the successes Keith Haring achieved he found it wrong to sell his work in exchange for money and because of that Keith Haring donated most of his work to charities. Keith’s reputation gradually began and kept growing as the years went by and as Keith Haring kept work in different countries around the world but Keith Haring was not in the art profession to popular, although he appreciated feedback from people in the community and artists, but Keith was concerned in the people around him. 
     In 1988, Keith Haring received saddening news that he had been diagnosed with AIDS. Although it was a dark time for Keith Haring he did not take a step back from art, but used this tragic event as a way to spread awareness of AIDS. Keith Haring found this unfortunate event in his life as an opportunity and kept moving in his life and started many of his pieces to leave an image that spread the message of AIDS. “No matter how long you work, it’s always going to end sometime. And there’s always going to be things left undone. And it wouldn’t matter if you lived until you were seventy-five. There would still be new ideas. There would still be things that you wished you had accomplished. You could work for several lifetimes…. part of the reason that I’m not having trouble facing the reality of death is that it’s not a limitation, in a way. It could have happened any time, and it is going to happen sometime. If you live your life according to that, death is irrelevant. Everything I’m doing right now is exactly what I want to do” (The Keith Haring Foundation). The next year, Keith created The Keith Haring Foundation in response to his diagnoses and to support AIDS organizations. Keith's foundation focused on children’s programs. The Keith Haring Foundation continues to receive charitable support of other AIDS-related organizations and people around the world.
    

                         Ignorance=Art, 1989
     Keith Haring publicized his work "based on a contract with the public that emerged with his first subway drawings and although it was not a written contract and more of a personal thing, he cared about the community" (Keith Haring: Journey of the Radiant Baby 14). Keith Haring tweaked the way many people view their everyday lives in way that we appreciate the small things and you can see the way he viewed the world by his work. Keith Haring his art to give the “streets” a voice. The way he painted his pieces showed how he expressed himself and cared about the community just as some artists forget where they came from when becoming known. Keith Haring was a visionary because although he may not have changed the world or be considered a hero he did spread positivity in his works and viewed the world as no one else; Keith Haring was "interested in humanity and wanted to make a world a better place" (Keith Haring: Journey of the Radiant Baby 20).

I am Jerry 
Son of Gloria Sanchez
Who needs family, friends, and adventure
Who loves sports, art, music
Who sees opportunities,
Who hates lazy people, dishonesty
Who fears failure, and wasps
Who dreams of success, prosperity, a good career
Who has found poems of Edgar Allen Poe
Resident of a city 30 minutes from downtown Houston
Sanchez

Thursday, May 9, 2013

Whats's Wrong With The World

     Growing up and to this day my family, who is my mom and my brother, have always been close because we were the only ones in the U.S. but as my mom worked she meet many friends along the way and we became close to them because they were in the same situation as us also. On weekends we would have dinners with them and some friends had kids around my age, which was a plus. One of the family friends were starting to be considered as family because of the help we would get from them and the help we would give them in return. I started calling them my aunt, my uncle and my cousins. My youngest cousin who was born around when i was 5 was diagnosed with autism and at times when we were over at my aunts and uncles house it seemed hard for them to raise him but one thing was for certain was that they loved him and we did also but as the years went by we started noticing that my cousins were somewhat ashamed and embarrassed of having an autistic brother. Although, I was not in their shoes I understood being autistic is not something anyone choose to be but all we could do is accept it because he was family and we loved him and in his way he expressed the love he had towards us. What’s wrong with the world is that although things like this happen you cannot be embarrassed of it because it was God's gift.

Whats's Wrong With The World


     There are many things we don't seem to appreciate in our everyday lives. The things we have to waking up everyday. Nature is an example of what we don't seem to appreciate and people nowadays trash the environment we are in. God’s art is everything he built around us and people trash it. There have been many improvements to prevent this from happening such as fines but there are people still out there who do not mind throwing their trash onto the streets and floors. When I was walking back to my apartment there was someone who was walking in front of me who was drinking a water bottle and as soon as he finished drinking it he through it onto the ground like it was nothing. I was astonished and did not believe he had just done that. People do not realize it’s hurting the environment but it also hurts animals. For instance, it can hurt birds by them choking on anything you may have thrown onto the ground. 

Whats Wrong With The World

  My mom, my brother and I are the only ones who live in the U.S. out of our whole family. My mom raised my brother and I by herself and was working two jobs to gives us the life wish she wished she had growing up. Being born in Mexico the only language she knew was Spanish because it was hard for her to find tie and learn English. It was even hard for my brother and I to see her sometimes because she would come home only to get dressed and that would only last thirty minutes. I don't have anything against my mom because I knew she was doing it fro us. People sometimes think that not being able to speak English gives them the chance to take advantage of her. My mom recently got in a wreck with another car by the mall and it was normal for both of them to jump out of their car and see if everyone was okay but the women in the car disrespectfully went to my mom and knew that she couldn't speak English well and started screaming at her. What’s wrong with the world is that people take advantage of some people of their inabilities.